lol Juggalos.....look ive been listenin to alot of your shit lately...I mean youve gotten better im not even gonna lie, imma give some criticisism.... it was cool how you talked about the underground, and your lyrics arent that bad...but you seem like your fumblin alot... and you said you dont talk about your crew BUT you talked about your clown possy....isnt that talkin about the crew? and you said he's unoriginal? Thats true but you're not the most original either...an underground juggalo rapper that talks about slicin people up...never heard that before...and you realize juggalos are just dick riders to ICP right? lol oh and I owuldnt have all that extra stuff at the begining and end. Just a little criticisizm, aye this is the most ive ever written on a submission on newgrounds...take it as a compliant
thanks for that i really agree with what your say i mean looking back at this i did make some plot holes in this but overall i destroyed him and now were both friends. I rerally hate when people call juggalo dick riders but thats just some people i listen to others underground astist beside icp just to let you know like cunninglyguist and diabolic, over all thanks for the criticisizm i like that people give me advise to do better next time so thanks man.
damn this shits good I really loved the hook
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